I love your work!
This was great! I admit, I thought that your story about the little girl and the wishing star that turned into her friend was better but this was really touching.
I loved how the girl's eyes were so dark yet innocent. Also I noticed that every character was unique, usually I'd expect the author to only make the main character look better made than the rest but that wasn't the case, great job.
The black and white was good to stick with but adding red as the only color always makes me interested, reminded me of the style of sin city. Your stories sound as if they would be in one of those short story Tim Burton books.
Mainly, I gave it a ten because of narration, it was like a woman telling an old fairy tale.
It gave it a four because of the ((Spoiler)) doll telling the story at the end. It's ear had teeth marks like it was bitten off and it looked a little creepy.
Did I miss something? You don't do easter eggs do you?
I liked the "Next Year? She'd be four by then!" line, made me laugh a little. Also, I liked where she had the sunglasses and was walking down the hall with her army.
Great, touching, sad, perfect ending.
Gemini man was my favorite boss!
This was wonderful!
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